This second draft of the script I feel is greatly improved. As mentioned before, the argument needed to sound more as though it was involving a mother-daughter relationship, and I didn't want either of the characters to give the impression that they were the 'villain'. Although it is a heated conflict, I want the viewer to still be able to have some sympathy, and to see the loving relationship that exists between the two characters, despite their problems.
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